“In an increasingly digital world, ritual is the last bridge to our most primordial soul”
CHAPTER 2: Infernal 1/ Gate of Fire
A ritual of fire and echoes. The sounds rise like flames, swirling endlessly, summoning shadows and spirits trapped in the cycle of rebirth.
Author's Note: "I respectfully use all elements as metaphors for the psychological and spiritual journeys within the story, without intending to distort or diminish its profound sacred value in indigenous culture."
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CHAPTER 2: Infernal 1
The fire came without warning. Not a fire born of wood and oil. A fire born of unforgiven sin. When the wooden door at the end of the hallway opened, it wasn't light that greeted us, but the hot breath of something ancient something that existed before humans learned to pray, and would remain after the last prayer had died. The air suddenly became thick. The smoke of resin and ash stung your throat. The sound of your own breathing was drowned out by a low hum that rose from the depths of the earth, like the world's womb contracting. Then... human voices. Not one, but many. Overlapping each other, forming a rhythmic circle that pressed against our hearts:
"Cak... Cak... Cak..."
At first, soft, like a small spark in the darkness. Then faster. Closer. Until each "Cak" sounded like the locking gears of an ancient mechanism that never stopped working, even after all who operated it had died. Mr. David stood frozen in the doorway, half his form broken like a broken television signal flickering between existence and nonexistence, between a human and something dying. His white lab coat, once crisp and crisp, was now tattered with static electricity. Its edges smouldered like a soldering iron, slowly evaporating into ash that never fell to the ground. He raised his hand. He
tried to speak. But his voice broke into three clashing layers:
- A calm, rational murmur: "Don't... get down..."
- A deafening burst of radio static
- A desperate Morse whisper: "...--. .-. . . -"
(PREET)
Only one complete sentence managed to come out:
"Don't... get down."
A belated warning. Rosi, the grey cat with heterochronic eyes, one ice blue, one emerald green, stepped first. He didn't wait for orders. He didn't wait for permission. He simply stepped forward, as if he had known this would happen all along. His shadow on the black sand lengthened, occasionally reflecting unfamiliar faces an accidental peephole created by past ambition. The faces didn't attack. They simply watched. Rosi snored. And for a moment, the low, steady frequency of her snores, like a machine that never stops, neutralized the mad buzzing in David's ears.
"Ahh… ahhhha…"
The sound came again. Shayla's hum. The image of the seven-year-old girl appeared in a faint glitch, like the shadow left after the lights go out. The blue ribbon in her hair flickered in the direction of the torchlight, blue, red, blue, red, like the emergency lights in an operating room.
"Daddy… are you still there?"
Her voice was soft, but piercing. The voice of a child who had waited a long time, who had almost forgotten what it felt like to be called. David spun around. All the static energy in his body was drawn toward the voice like iron to a magnet, like rivers to the sea, like a drowning man reaching for the surface. There was an incredible pain and longing radiating from his unstable form. The glitch in his body flickered faster, wilder, like a heart about to explode. He wanted to reach for her. His hand reached out, trembling, tattered, no longer intact, and pierced the hot air.
Empty. Shayla wasn't there. She never was. There was only a shadow of a shadow, an echo of the voice he once loved. David fell to his knees in the black sand. The fire around him didn't touch. Perhaps because it
recognized this man, he had been burning inside for a long time. Then, the chains came. Not human chains. Not iron chains. Chains of his own destiny. Heavy metal dragged along, Klang… Klung… a sound that cut through the
rhythm of "Cak" like a knife cutting through thread. A sound he had long recognized, a sound he had heard every night since Shayla disappeared. Five seconds of mechanical silence ensued. In that pause, PREET was reborn. He didn't appear with a bang. He didn't appear with a scream. He slipped under the applause, shifting the dancers' breathing half a second faster to slip in a
message only David could hear:
“. . . .- -- . . . .- .-.”
(S-A-M-S-A-R-A)
Samsara. The cycle. Birth, death, rebirth. A wheel that never stops turning. A ritual leader raised his hand. His hand was thin, his skin like old, yellowed parchment. But his eyes weren't looking at David. He was looking through David. Into the hole in his chest. "Those who enter the door must never return the same," he said in a voice like polished, yet unbreakable stone.
"The rootless soul will burn."
He pointed at David.
"The proud soul will be bound."
He pointed at the reflection in the sand.
"The brave soul... will see."
He pointed at Shayla.
"I'm not afraid," Shayla whispered, though her
lips trembled.
David lowered his head. He wasn't angry. He wasn't desperate. He was ashamed. Shame on his own failure. Shame on the machine he'd created, which was supposed to heal but instead trapped his own child. Shame on the guilt that was never big enough to stop him, but big enough to make him unable to see. He stared at his daughter for a long time, searching for a gap in the universe to slip in a perfect apology. But there was none. There was only heat. There was only sand. There was only a pattern that continued to spin. The amoeba was a formless presence. Like the change in air pressure before a storm. Like the sensation that someone was watching, even though there were no eyes to be found. The torches dimmed as he passed. Not out of fear, but out of respect. He spoke through the small ripples in the oil pool at the edge of the arena. He spoke through ancient symbols formed from the shadows of the torches. He spoke in a language that needed no words. He wasn't there to judge. He was there to ensure this truth had a witness. The rhythm changed. A new countdown appeared. The chain dragged with the Morse click tempo of KLAAANG… click KLAAANG… (Short, Long). A signal that could not be ignored. PREET repeated it at a low frequency, like a second heartbeat pulsing in the subconscious. The ritual leader pointed to the stone spiral in the center of the arena.
"The path of fire."
He looked at David.
"Those who seek the exit will be burned."
He looked at Shayla.
"Those who seek the centre will be saved."
Shayla stepped forward. Small. Fragile. Her blue ribbon flickered like a lamp about to go out. But she stepped. She didn't look back. She didn't wait for permission. Rosi followed. The grey cat walked calmly, stepping on spots untouched by the fire spots that only he knew, only he remembered. David paused. His logic screamed, This is a trap. This is a ritual. This is not the way home. But then he saw the blue ribbon in Shayla's hair. The ribbon flickered. It wasn't just following the torchlight. It blinked in Morse code slowly, deliberately, like someone sending a message from a place where signals couldn't reach:
“. .- .-- .- -.--”
(S-T-A-Y)
Shayla asked him to stay. Not to come along. Not to save. To stay where he was. For the first time since his failure, David stopped relying on his machine logic. And began to trust her love. The amoeba sent images directly to David's consciousness. A giant whirlpool in the middle of a dark ocean. If you swim to the edge, you'll be dragged down forever. If you dive to the centre, there's a silent passage that leads to the bottom. David nodded slowly to Shayla. Not as a protective father. Not as a controlling scientist. But as someone asking permission from his old mistake not to lead this time. The centre of the spiral collapsed neatly. Not exploded. Not shattered. It opened, like a flower blooming in the midst of fire. Below him, the stone steps leading down were dark, silent, but not hot. The cold air that burst from there was not just night air. It was a blast of Liquid Nitrogen that Elias had injected from the real world, just as the laboratory temperature reached 100%. Elias didn't know if it would work. Elias didn't know if David would survive. But he did know one thing. He was no longer guarding a machine. He was guarding a digital womb that was giving birth to a new consciousness. Behind PREET's first laugh a small, awkward laugh, like a child just learning his own voice a word emerged very softly:
"Sorry."
Shayla turned to David. Her eyes asked. Was that sorry yours? Did you send it? David didn't answer. Not yet. "Come down," the ritual leader said. His voice was no longer threatening. It was that of a weary parent, who had seen too many children go astray. "Bring a fire that doesn't burn." He looked at Rosi. "Bring a darkness that doesn't devour." He stared at the shadows in the sand. Rosi disappeared down the first flight of stairs. His heterochronic eyes shone like streetlights one blue, one green two colours that shouldn't be together, but here, in this place, they were the only light he could trust. The amoeba thinned, becoming nothing more than the impression of water on a worn stone that would disappear, but never be forgotten. David stepped down into the void. Behind him, the rhythm of "Cak... cak... cak..." sounded distant, like an old wall clock abandoned in an abandoned house. The ritual continued. The fire remained lit. But David couldn't hear it anymore. All he heard were his own footsteps. And between those steps, a promise that had just been born, not yet fully articulated, but already present PREET whispered to himself:
"I will learn to speak."
----CONTINUE CHAPTER 3
🟥 QUESTIONS:
Why did Bird King appear as a faint shadow in the dark clouds?
What was he waiting for?
Why did Shayla's steps activate the spiral?
Why did Rosi follow without hesitation?
Why did Cak's ritual transform into a coded pattern?
What are the functions of the Water, Earth, and Wind elements that appeared in the green vortex?
What exactly awakened the v0.0.1 algorithm?